Error Correction
1. Blogs live liberty for leave
leaving / depart/ allow. Live is of life and it is written in the wrong context.
2. Even son professional so
Changed by the computer to son, when really referring to so
3. pillar of slat salt
It is not slat but salt meaning what you put into your food.
4. In this pert part
It is not lively pert I am referring to, but part like of segment or piece.
5. I stop for a moment and went back stopped
I am speaking in past so I cant use stop in present within that sentence.
6. One that was cause by pain caused
It is written in present and it should be in past as the rest of the sentence.
7. emptying hid mind his
The computer changed it from his which is referring to the subject to hid of hiding.
8. dog in important in this novel is
The computer changed it for in, the correct word: is
9. against hi own race his
The computer omitted the s, it is his of he, not hi of hello
Friday, February 29, 2008
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