assasinations: This is wrong word choice and it doesn't fit well into the sentence.
correction: perform the murders
belief: This is the wrong word to use. The correct one is believe. This word means to accept and recognize that something is true.
correction: he wanted to believe/ I personally don't believe Macbeth.
weird sisters: This is a proper name, so it should be capitalized.
correction: Weird Sisters
So who will kill Macbeth?: The sentence begun with So, and this is incorrect.
correction: Who will kill Macbeth?
Monday, May 12, 2008
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