Corrections # 2

1. Billy, the character he has created has created

Omit the he which is incorrect because the subject has already been mentioned with its proper name.

2. servant is recalls fraise servant recalls a fraise

This part of the segment has wrong wording because it doesn’t make sense. When referring to the servant who recalls a fraise it is wrong to put “servant is” due to the fact that there can’t be two nouns next to each other. Is and recalls are both nouns.

3. hi own race his own race

In this part of the sentence I was referring to a subject, and therefore “his” was the correct word to use. Hi was an incomplete form of this word.

4. baring antiwar book boring antiwar book

I meant to say that I thought it was a boring book, not baring. This was probably changed by the computer