Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Corrections

1. to emphasize on specific regions in Europe like Germany and France besides from England.

-to emphasize specific....

There is no need to use an “on” in that segment. Omitting makes the sentence clear and less wordy.

2. mentions names of places in German

mentions names of places in Germany.

The “y” was accidentally omitted. I was referring to the country and not to the language.

3. These is one of those poems

This is one of those poems

Because I was talking about one singular poem and comparing it to the rest, the correct use of the word should have been “This”, which is singular. “These” would be used when mentioning a plural subject instead of a singular.

4. Many of the time, the author

Many of the times

“time” should have been plural because I was referring to how in various occasions something happens, not how in one time or occasion.

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